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One two three four
Let's all take turns falling
Yellow orange red ash
Let's all take turns changing.
The angels are erasing the sky
There are smudge marks now, but soon
it will all be white.
Just like us. Soon, we will be clean again--
we will have forgotten our mistakes
and mistake each other for people we are not.
We will hold conversations where words are sticky
And get stuck talking about all the things that don't matter.
Five six seven eight
The trees are losing weight
Our conversations will have developed an anorexic tendency
Our words will have gone to feather
So just lie to me. Tell me
everything's okay, tell me
it's okay to believe thing's aren't.
Nine ten eleven twelve
How fast the world is spinning now
How quickly color consumes the roads
and then recedes
Like a tidal wave.
How grey the city is; there is no contrast
between what we do and what we mean to do
What we believe and what we mean to believe.
One two three four
Actions ring louder than words
You can see my colors change without me having to speak.
Let's all take turns falling
Yellow orange red ash
Let's all take turns changing.
The angels are erasing the sky
There are smudge marks now, but soon
it will all be white.
Just like us. Soon, we will be clean again--
we will have forgotten our mistakes
and mistake each other for people we are not.
We will hold conversations where words are sticky
And get stuck talking about all the things that don't matter.
Five six seven eight
The trees are losing weight
Our conversations will have developed an anorexic tendency
Our words will have gone to feather
So just lie to me. Tell me
everything's okay, tell me
it's okay to believe thing's aren't.
Nine ten eleven twelve
How fast the world is spinning now
How quickly color consumes the roads
and then recedes
Like a tidal wave.
How grey the city is; there is no contrast
between what we do and what we mean to do
What we believe and what we mean to believe.
One two three four
Actions ring louder than words
You can see my colors change without me having to speak.
inspiration: [link]
my entry for *dreamsinstatic's contest: [link] .
the capitalization is intentional. i'm sorry if it bothers you.
sometimes, when i write without thinking, it comes out really nice. other times...not so much. i hope this is one of the times where, when i look back on it, i like it.
my entry for *dreamsinstatic's contest: [link] .
the capitalization is intentional. i'm sorry if it bothers you.
sometimes, when i write without thinking, it comes out really nice. other times...not so much. i hope this is one of the times where, when i look back on it, i like it.
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i like it! so much better than mine XD good work and good luck!